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Summer's day by paige
Posted: Nov 23, 2017 by: Paige Phipps (paigep19) on: Year 5
This is my poem,
My best friend loves ice cream it is his favorite treat to eat.
it's grass for rugs.
it's frogs and bugs.
it's favorite treat in a mug.
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Sandra K.
Nov 23, 2017
Summer is the best i really enjoyed your poem. |
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Ivan V.
Nov 23, 2017
That is very good |