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The wonderful Royal Wedding!
Posted: May 11, 2018 by: Emelia Awang (eawang20) on: Year 4
It’s the most wonderful time of the year! The wedding of the year will take part on the 19th of May. Everyone is invited! The Cake is huge!
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Emelia A.
May 11, 2018
I know but I didn't realise there was that much. |
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Milana K.
May 11, 2018
Hi Emlia! i really like reading your work! but it would be better if you could write a bit more about the wedding |
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Elizabeth C.
May 11, 2018
Hey emelia i would like it more if you put more and it will help if you put who's wedding it is for people who do not know and people from other parts of the world. |
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Emily J.
May 11, 2018
Emelia it would of been better if you added more information to yours, and more work |
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Charlotte B.
May 11, 2018
A Great blog post! |