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The wedding of the year!
Posted: May 11, 2018 by: Elizabeth Clarke (eclarke20) on: Year 4
Are you wondering what prince harry’s and meghan markle’s wedding is about?If you want to know then carry on reading this blog.Pastry chef Claire Ptak, who runs Violet Cakes in Hackney, east London, will make the couple's lemon and elder flower wedding cake.The wedding is expected to cost up to £32 million pounds!!!!!So if you want to watch this I suggest you switch on that TV and enjoy!
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Elizabeth C.
May 11, 2018
Lucy that is mean and i know ollie forgot sorry. |
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Lucy B.
May 11, 2018
you dont need to put how much it costs because no one is interested |
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Ollie M.
May 11, 2018
You haven't done capital letters for Harry and Meghan. |
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Elizabeth C.
May 11, 2018
OK ben thanks for helping me improve. |
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Elizabeth C.
May 11, 2018
The wedding will be on the 19th of may. |
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Ben B.
May 11, 2018
You don't need to type pounds because you have used a pound sign. |
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Charlotte B.
May 11, 2018
It's a great post! |
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Lacey-Mai L.
May 11, 2018
I really like this blog well done Izzie good work |
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Charlotte B.
May 11, 2018
+ I like that you used good language! What day is the wedding?->Next time could you tell a bit more about the wedding and use capital letters for names. |
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Milana K.
May 11, 2018
Hi Izzie! i really enjoyed reading you work! i wold like it you could tell me which church is Megan and Harry's wedding at... |